THe graph shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opned in one country between 2011 and 2018

The given line graph illustrates the amount of

shops

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closures

and openings in one nation from 2011 to 2018.

Overall

, it can be clearly seen that there was

downward

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trend in both

shop

closures

and openings for the presented times. Looking at the details, as regards

to

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shop

openings, the

number

of new shops started at approximately 8,500 in 2011 and it had

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decreased to 4,000.

Then

, followed by an increasing

number

of

shop

opening

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for the next two years was at 5,000 and just over 6,000 respectively. In the

last

year, the figure decreased to 3,000. With respect to

shop

closures

, there was around 6,500

shop

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started their business.

Then

, followed by

fluctuation

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number

of

shop

closures

in the next three years. In 2015,

this

figure

was

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hit

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the bottom at only about 500 new shops.

Finally

, the

number

of new

shop

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was remain stable for the next

last

three years and reached

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just over 5,000

in

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the end year.