Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and inciude any relevant examples from your own.
Certain individuals claim that the extinction of flora and fauna is the major environmental issue in
this
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whereas
others think that there are more serious problems. Linking Words
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although
other ecological issues may create risks for humanity, the loss of wildlife can lead to the deterioration of ecosystems.
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for example
, those ginger groups that are seeking to show the level of pollution in water. They may fear that an increase in the amount of dirty water polluted by garbage, Linking Words
such
as plastic and paper, will lead to a lack of natural resources. Linking Words
However
, I do not think that contamination of raw materials is the biggest difficulty because accepted solutions will not be effective if structural and functional units of ecology are destroyed.
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on the other hand
, argue that the loss of particular species of plants and animals is the main environmental problem of our time because the consequences of it can be the degradation of Linking Words
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due to
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argument because, as discussed above, if a certain part of nature is cancelled, it will completely affect other parts of the living world.
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although
other environmental obstacles associated with the pollution of the surroundings are important, I believe that plant and animal life should be reserved too.Linking Words
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task achievement
Consider expanding your arguments a bit further and providing additional supporting details for better clarity and depth.
language
Pay attention to minor grammatical and lexical inaccuracies. They don't majorly impact comprehension but refining them will enhance overall clarity.
coherence cohesion
Ensure your transitions between points are slightly smoother for better flow. For instance, transitioning from one viewpoint to another can be made more seamless.
structure
Your essay has a clear and concise introduction that efficiently sets up the discussion.
content
You present balanced viewpoints, discussing both sides of the argument comprehensively.
structure
Your conclusion is precise and well-linked to the arguments you've made in the body paragraphs.
Your opinion
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Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?