Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you thing this is a positive or a negative development?
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illnesses
alternative
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.
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processes
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apply
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times
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on
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body
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treatments
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problems
treatment
.
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in
the
number of societies; I think it leads to drawback developments. Correct article usage
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