Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you thing this is a positive or a negative development?
These days, there are increasing number of
people
with health
issues are
trying to Correct pronoun usage
who are
cure
their illness
with Fix the agreement mistake
illnesses
alternative
treatment
and medicine rather than visiting health
facilities. I believe that this
is a negative development and this
essay will attempt to elaborate a
couple of fundamental reasons why an Change preposition
on a
alternative
treatment
leads to drawback
impact on Correct article usage
a drawback
people
's health
.
To begin
with, the first reason why alternative
medicines are negative is that they are not based on scientific evidence. They do not go through lab trials, while
medical treatment
has already passed the series of trial and error process
. Fix the agreement mistake
processes
Alternative
curing is only based on cultural believe
from the previous societies in Replace the word
beliefs
an
ancient Correct article usage
apply
time
. Fix the agreement mistake
times
Thus
, it may lead to negative effect
Fix the agreement mistake
effects
for
Change preposition
on
people
's body
. Fix the agreement mistake
bodies
For instance
, China's medicine which
will Correct pronoun usage
apply
cure
cancer but until now it is
not Verb problem
has
proof
.
The second reason is Verb problem
been proven
one
of the alternative
treatment
used for several diseases. Fix the agreement mistake
treatments
This
way usually only cure
the basic symptoms not the root of the Correct subject-verb agreement
cures
health
problem causes
. Verb problem
apply
For example
, acupuncture is one
of the treatment
from China Change to a plural noun
treatments
in
which Change preposition
apply
people
believing
can Wrong verb form
believe
cure
several serious illnesses such
as diabetes, high blood pressure, and health
problem
. Meanwhile, those diseases will be treated differently in medical Fix the agreement mistake
problems
treatment
.
To sum up
, nowadays alternative
herbs gain
popularity Wrong verb form
have gaining
from
Change preposition
in
the
number of societies; I think it leads to drawback developments. Correct article usage
a
Firstly
, primary
reason is that it does not Add an article
the primary
has
Change the verb form
have
a
scientific proof and Remove the article
apply
secondly
, one
medicine can cure
several illnesses where
in medical Correct word choice
whereas
treatment
one
health
issues
may Fix the agreement mistake
issue
has
Change the verb form
have
different
Add an article
a different
treatment
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