The bar chart below shows number of Seals, Whales and Dolphins in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018.

The bar chart below shows number of Seals, Whales and Dolphins in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart below shows number of Seals, Whales and Dolphins in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018.
The given bar chart highlights information about the number of Seals, Whales and
Dolphins
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in the Gormez Straits, over a twelve-year period, from 2006 to 2018.
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, it can be seen that Dolphin members increased over the period in question
while
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the swarms of both Seals and Whales experienced fluctuation ratios in comparison with
Dolphins
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. Looking at the details, only 15
Dolphins
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were witnessed in 2006 but
this
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amount rose to over 20 in 2010 and it continued to grow to 33 in 2014.
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in 2018,
Dolphins
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crowds hit a peak of 50. If we look at Whales, it was ranked second with 23 figures in the first year and it experienced a small increase in 2010 but
then
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decreased to 22 in 2014 and
subsequently
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, saw its top with 38 in 2018. Regarding Seals, its figure commenced at 42 which was the highest in 2006 but in 2010, declined to half and again in 2014, improved to 33 and eventually in 2018,reached its top with 43 members.

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