The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pictogram illustrates the production of
sugar
from sugarcane
.
It is clear that
there are seven stages in the process of extracting sugar
from the sugarcane
, which divide into two stages: sugarcane
cultivation and sugar
extraction. The former consists of three steps
, the latter containing four steps
.
The cultivation really interesting for one reason: it only takes three steps
to finish, however
, growing sugarcane
requires a significant amount of time
, particularly during the initial phase. For instance
, the time
for sugarcane
fully develop is from twelve to eighteen month which really crucial for the following steps
such
as harvesting and finally
separating the juice from the sugarcane
.
In contrast
, second stage
does not require than much time
compared to first stage
, however
, it only has more than one step. According to
the pictogram, the separated juice flow through the limestone filter then
channels through the Evaporator to turn juice in to syrup. After that they refine the crystal from the syrup and on last
step, the crystal is dried and chilled to become sugar
. This
stage
does not require significant amounts of time
as first stage
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