The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pictogram illustrates the production of
sugar
from
sugarcane
.
It is clear that
there are seven stages in the process of extracting
sugar
from the
sugarcane
, which divide into two stages:
sugarcane
cultivation and
sugar
extraction. The former consists of three
steps
, the latter containing four
steps
. The cultivation really interesting for one reason: it only takes three
steps
to finish,
however
, growing
sugarcane
requires a significant amount of
time
, particularly during the initial phase.
For instance
, the
time
for
sugarcane
fully develop is from twelve to eighteen month which really crucial for the following
steps
such
as harvesting and
finally
separating the juice from the
sugarcane
.
In contrast
, second
stage
does not require than much
time
compared to first
stage
,
however
, it only has more than one step.
According to
the pictogram, the separated juice flow through the limestone filter
then
channels through the Evaporator to turn juice in to syrup. After that they refine the crystal from the syrup and on
last
step, the crystal is dried and chilled to become
sugar
.
This
stage
does not require significant amounts of
time
as first
stage
.
Submitted by quynhnhu.tranphan7 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sugar, sugarcane, steps, time, stage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacturing process
  • sugar cane
  • harvesting
  • transporting
  • factory
  • crushing
  • extracting
  • juice
  • filtering
  • impurities
  • heating
  • evaporating
  • syrup
  • boiling
  • crystallizing
  • sugar
  • separating
  • drying
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • stage
  • process
What to do next:
Look at other essays: