The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pictogram illustrates the production of
sugar
from Use synonyms
sugarcane
.
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It is clear that
there are seven stages in the process of extracting Linking Words
sugar
from the Use synonyms
sugarcane
, which divide into two stages: Use synonyms
sugarcane
cultivation and Use synonyms
sugar
extraction. The former consists of three Use synonyms
steps
, the latter containing four Use synonyms
steps
.
The cultivation really interesting for one reason: it only takes three Use synonyms
steps
to finish, Use synonyms
however
, growing Linking Words
sugarcane
requires a significant amount of Use synonyms
time
, particularly during the initial phase. Use synonyms
For instance
, the Linking Words
time
for Use synonyms
sugarcane
fully develop is from twelve to eighteen month which really crucial for the following Use synonyms
steps
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such
as harvesting and Linking Words
finally
separating the juice from the Linking Words
sugarcane
.
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In contrast
, second Linking Words
stage
does not require than much Use synonyms
time
compared to first Use synonyms
stage
, Use synonyms
however
, it only has more than one step. Linking Words
According to
the pictogram, the separated juice flow through the limestone filter Linking Words
then
channels through the Evaporator to turn juice in to syrup. After that they refine the crystal from the syrup and on Linking Words
last
step, the crystal is dried and chilled to become Linking Words
sugar
. Use synonyms
This
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stage
does not require significant amounts of Use synonyms
time
as first Use synonyms
stage
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sugar, sugarcane, steps, time, stage with synonyms.
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