The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pictogram illustrates the production of
sugar
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from
sugarcane
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.
It is clear that
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there are seven stages in the process of extracting
sugar
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from the
sugarcane
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, which divide into two stages:
sugarcane
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cultivation and
sugar
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extraction. The former consists of three
steps
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, the latter containing four
steps
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. The cultivation really interesting for one reason: it only takes three
steps
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to finish,
however
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, growing
sugarcane
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requires a significant amount of
time
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, particularly during the initial phase.
For instance
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, the
time
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for
sugarcane
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fully develop is from twelve to eighteen month which really crucial for the following
steps
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such
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as harvesting and
finally
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separating the juice from the
sugarcane
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.
In contrast
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, second
stage
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does not require than much
time
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compared to first
stage
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,
however
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, it only has more than one step.
According to
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the pictogram, the separated juice flow through the limestone filter
then
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channels through the Evaporator to turn juice in to syrup. After that they refine the crystal from the syrup and on
last
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step, the crystal is dried and chilled to become
sugar
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.
This
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stage
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does not require significant amounts of
time
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as first
stage
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sugar, sugarcane, steps, time, stage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacturing process
  • sugar cane
  • harvesting
  • transporting
  • factory
  • crushing
  • extracting
  • juice
  • filtering
  • impurities
  • heating
  • evaporating
  • syrup
  • boiling
  • crystallizing
  • sugar
  • separating
  • drying
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • stage
  • process
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