The tables below give the distribution of world population in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give the distribution of world population in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given two tables illustrate the total
world
population
and its distribution for six continents in 1950 and 2000, and an estimation for the new
population
in 2050.
Overall
, the total
population
of the
world
followed an upward trend and it will continue to grow.
Moreover
, the
Asia
continent was the most crowded region in the
world
in 1950 and 2000, which will
also
protect its position over the period of 50 years. From 1950 to 2000, the
world
population
was 2.5 billion, and 6.0 billion respectively. Africa's, Latin America's, Oceania's, and
Asia
's percentages increased after 50 years, and Africa and
Asia
saw the biggest improvement by %4.
Asia
's
population
peaked at %60 of the total humankind in 2000. The remaining continents' size decreased over time, and Europe lost almost half of the ratio
,
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and dropped to 12%. In the feature, the total
world
population
will be estimated
9.0
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billion. Africa's
population
will be increased by 7% to 20% in 2050,
in contrast
,
many
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regions'
population
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,
for instance
, Australia's and Latin America's will
be remained
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constant. Europe will continue to lose
their
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almost half of
the
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population
again,
however
,
Asia
will protect its dominance by far in 2050.
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