The tables below give the distribution of world population in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given two tables illustrate the total

world

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population

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and its distribution for six continents in 1950 and 2000, and an estimation for the new

population

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in 2050.

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, the total

population

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of the

world

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followed an upward trend and it will continue to grow.

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, the

Asia

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continent was the most crowded region in the

world

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in 1950 and 2000, which will

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protect its position over the period of 50 years. From 1950 to 2000, the

world

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population

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was 2.5 billion, and 6.0 billion respectively. Africa's, Latin America's, Oceania's, and

Asia

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's percentages increased after 50 years, and Africa and

Asia

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saw the biggest improvement by %4.

Asia

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population

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peaked at %60 of the total humankind in 2000. The remaining continents' size decreased over time, and Europe lost almost half of the ratio

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and dropped to 12%. In the feature, the total

world

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population

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will be estimated

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billion. Africa's

population

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will be increased by 7% to 20% in 2050,

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many

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in many

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regions'

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population

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populations

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for instance

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, Australia's and Latin America's will

be remained

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remain

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constant. Europe will continue to lose

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almost half of

the

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its

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population

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again,

however

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Asia

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will protect its dominance by far in 2050.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words world, population, asia with synonyms.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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