Some say that modern technology has made shopping easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give yor opinion.

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It is true that the new modern life of technology makes shopping easier,

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some people tend to disagree , that technology has made our life terrible . In

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essay, I will discuss both ideas

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I will move on to give my own view. On one side of the

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there are people who argue the benefits of shopping online considerably outweigh its disadvantages. The main reason for believing

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is that in modern ,life people have no

time

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to do shopping,they have several of duty to do . It is

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possible to say that it is easy to order items from around the world . On good illustration of

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is, my mother orders a dress from France and it is delivered in just two days,

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of travel to the country.

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, shopping online is making some effort for us ,but it is worth it .

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, you can not touch the material and the equality .

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, members of the public said that they sometimes bring the wrong size and we have to wait extra

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, you see items on their website and when deliver to you it is different.

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, shopping online is unsafe to give your information card and save on their website . In conclusion, technology makes our lives easier and more convenient, but it is unsafe

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sometimes they cheat you on the material. Personally, I agree with

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statement, shopping online is saving us

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and we can do it every

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

7.5

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Relevant & specific examples

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263 words

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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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