the maps below show an industrial area in the town of norbiton and planned future development of the site. summarises the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

the maps below show an industrial area in the town of norbiton and planned future development of the site.

summarises the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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There are two maps below that show us an industrial
area
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in the town of Norbiton.
One
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of them shows the
area
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for now and the other
one
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is a
plan
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for the future
that is
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yet to be executed.
One
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of the main features of the future
plan
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is how much more extended it is going to be compared to the present
plan
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.the
area
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is going to contain a lot more involvement than it already does. As we can see in the present
plan
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the
area
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only contains eight factories and nothing else and has no access to the farmland that locates in the north,
while
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contrary to the updated version the factories will be gone and they will be replaced with seven houses and other facilities
such
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as
one
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school,
one
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playground,
one
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medical centre and several shops around the two squares making it will be easy access to the people who will be living there. The other thing
that is
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considered a big change in the
plan
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is how there will be a bridge crossing the river and
one
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of the seven houses will be built there.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "that is".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area, one, plan with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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