The map presents us the modify of seaside resort Templeton that happened period between 1990 and 2005.

The map presents us the modify of seaside resort Templeton that happened period between 1990 and 2005.
The two pictures compare the seaside resort Templeton in 1990 and 2005.
Overall
, there are several modifications including renovation and addition of some facilities and infrastructures. In the northwest area of the map, it can be seen that there was a lake surrounded by a big house, houses and
trees
in 1990. But in 2015, a house and the
trees
in the east of the lake were changed to hotels, and there was an addition of housing areas in the south of it. The housing area on the north side of the sea was made into hotels and a supermarket. In the eastern areas of the map show the
trees
beside a school were cut down in 1990, and was built an airport. The hospital was located on the northeast of the map. It
also
can be seen that the housing area next to the hospital was extended. In the
last
15 years, the housing and the
trees
regions in the northeast of the sea were demolished and modernized by the addition of a factory and ferry harbour. The railway station and parking lot were unchanged. In sum, in the
last
15 years, the seaside resort of Templeton modernized and developed significantly.
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