An overseas friend has invited you to visit his country. You are planning to visit him. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter  Thank him for the invitation and accept the invitation  Write details about your visit  Briefly describe what you want to do there.

Dear Rohan, I hope

this

email finds you well. I am so excited to visit you next month and I am very thankful for the invitation. I will be visiting Dubai during the

last

week of July, and as promised I have sanctioned extra leaves for

this

trip.

Moreover

, my brother is accompanying me on

this

trip and we three will have a great time together.

Therefore

, I have created an itinerary for the trip and

according to

,that we will visit Burj Khalifa, Dubai Mall and AI centre during our first two days. In the following days we will spend our time at a nice beach near Al-Jumrah and nights will be spent at the lavish resort of King Al-Amiri. At his , resort there is a special gathering and there is going to be a night party which will include puppets dance, belly dance and a live orchestra. You will be surprised to know that Rahat Fateh Ali Khan is performing during that night and we would be able to meet him privately as he is staying in the same resort. Obviously, I will be bringing my DSLR to click nice pictures. I can't wait to see you soon. Yours friendly, Karan

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6 paragraphs

204 words

9.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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Topic Vocabulary:

gratitude
excitement
itinerary
arrival
accommodation
transportation
local customs
landmarks
culinary delights
get-together
pack essentials
cultural norms
sightseeing
reunion
recommendations
invaluable experience

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