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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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People
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 in the present day are no longer buying printed newspapers or
books
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 because they are able to read online. Meanwhile, there are a lot of advantages to paperless
books
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. In my view,
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 slightly agree with
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 statement,
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this
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 writing will give reasons why. On the one hand, not all communities can access the printed paper.
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, in a city area, the number of newspaper sellers is not much as in the past.
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, is hard for
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 to buy it and they will think despite waiting for a seller to come across their house or walk to bookstores, it will be better to access it on the internet from the inside place.
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,
people
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 can get many benefits from reading online.
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it is free and some of the
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 maybe will charge a cost but not expensive as we buy at offline stores.
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reading from the screen can reduce time consumption for buying it. The other meaning,
people
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 do not have to go outside to buy a
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 but, they just have to sit down and scroll on electronic commerce or the website. In conclusion, both ways of reading have their own disadvantages and advantages.
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, it
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 leads back to someone's preference. Some
people
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 prefer to read handbooks because it gives a different sensation where online
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 can not.
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, they can mark the
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 with a pen or highlight directly and some of them just like the smell of the
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. In my opinion, it depends on what kind of
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 it is. For subjects or school related, I prefer to access the internet, but for ,fiction I prefer to buy or read at the library.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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