You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter • say what the participants liked about the hotel • explain why they were unhappy about the food • suggest what the manage� should do to improve the food in future

Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to you in regard to a recent
expirience
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experience
that we had in your hotel
last
Monday during our
anual
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annual
performance meeting. To start I am Gonzalo Fuentes, Wearthy's Manager.
Firstly
, I would like to mention, that not only myself
also
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my entire team was really
greatfull
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grateful
to be in
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precence
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presence
of
such
talented
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team, they were very friendly
an
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and
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made all of us feel really comfortable, the decoration was really
according to
the situation,
as well as
the DJ performed
incredible
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.
Altough
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Although
,
such
a great experience we had, I have to say the food was not acceptable
according to
the price that I had been charged. The menu was changed
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the
last
minute ,not having
vegan
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the vegan
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option
in
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the main plate.
Hence
, two of my employees did not have lunch. So, I suggest
for
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future to avoid expontaneous changes,
such
as experienced
last
Monday. Another suggestion
to
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extend the menu and add some Vegan options. I hope my feedback
help
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helps
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to improve your
costumer
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customer
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service. Yours
sincererly
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sincerely
,
Gonzalp
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Gonzalo
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task achievement
Pay attention to spelling errors such as 'expirience' instead of 'experience' and 'greatfull' instead of 'grateful'. These small mistakes can affect the overall professionalism of your letter.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph contains a single clear idea. For example, separate the positive feedback about the hotel staff and the decor from the criticism about the food to enhance clarity.
task achievement
You have addressed all parts of the task effectively, mentioning both the positives and negatives of the experience.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing statements are polite and appropriately formal for the context of the letter.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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