You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter • say what the participants liked about the hotel • explain why they were unhappy about the food • suggest what the manage� should do to improve the food in future
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing to you in regard to a recent
expirience
that we had in your hotel Correct your spelling
experience
last
Monday during our anual
performance meeting. To start I am Gonzalo Fuentes, Wearthy's Manager.
Correct your spelling
annual
Firstly
, I would like to mention, that not only myself also
my entire team was really Correct word choice
but also
greatfull
to be in Correct your spelling
grateful
Correct article usage
the precence
precence
of Correct your spelling
presence
such
talented
team, they were very friendly Correct article usage
a talented
an
made all of us feel really comfortable, the decoration was really Correct your spelling
and
according to
the situation, as well as
the DJ performed incredible
.
Change the adjective
incredibly
Altough
, Correct your spelling
Although
such
a great experience we had, I have to say the food was not acceptable according to
the price that I had been charged. The menu was changed in
the Change preposition
at
last
minute ,not having vegan
option Add an article
the vegan
a vegan
in
the main plate. Change preposition
on
Hence
, two of my employees did not have lunch.
So, I suggest for
future to avoid expontaneous changes, Change preposition
in
such
as experienced last
Monday. Another suggestion to
extend the menu and add some Vegan options.
I hope my feedback Add a missing verb
is to
help
to improve your Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
costumer
service.
Yours Correct your spelling
customer
sincererly
,
Correct your spelling
sincerely
Gonzalp
Correct your spelling
Gonzalo
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task achievement
Pay attention to spelling errors such as 'expirience' instead of 'experience' and 'greatfull' instead of 'grateful'. These small mistakes can affect the overall professionalism of your letter.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph contains a single clear idea. For example, separate the positive feedback about the hotel staff and the decor from the criticism about the food to enhance clarity.
task achievement
You have addressed all parts of the task effectively, mentioning both the positives and negatives of the experience.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing statements are polite and appropriately formal for the context of the letter.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,