You are selling your TV and you think your friend might be interested in buying it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you must write: 1.Why are you selling the TV 2.The specifications and price that you are quoting 3.Invite him/her over to your place so they can decide to buy the TV from you.

#tv #friend #specifications #price #place

Dear Sanjay, I hope you are doing well and all your family number. As you know I want to sell my old

and the selling price is very low.

this

was purchased by my close friend.

Firstly

This

is very easy to access in all things and the

inch fourth is very large .

In addition

, I buy in my

because I purchased new latest module

with internet content so

then

I want to sell my new

but my old

is very smart and uses full that access.so I have sold by my best friend Sanjay or who is my family member.

This

is in my hometown and my friend is coming to my hometown and discuss all items and you see all functions completed

then

buying the

. Best regards pooja

Submitted by sanjayp029 on Tue Jun 06 2023

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

141 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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