some people think that the government should take care of disadvantaged people such as unemployed and homeless people. do you agree or disagree

Recently, there has been

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increase in

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population and

although

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rise has applied huge options for jobs , education and so on , sometimes

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rise has led to bad situations

such

as homeless and unemployed . Yet , there is some disagreement as to whether the

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government

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to look care of

people

who need

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or not .

While

there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary, I personally believe that the

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government

should take care of them . The reasons to support my view are as follows . First of all , every

people

who live in the world need to live in

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own place because sleeping in

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bed or cooking your own food is necessary for everyone .

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, everyone

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not

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personal value

this

is the reason why some peoples

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not any property for living .

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to say ,

goverments

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governments

government

should look care of

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homeless

people

and

goverments

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governments

government

have to build some living

place

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for them to good life quality . Equally important ,

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though

, there was a big unemployed problem in

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every part of the world .

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peoples'

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rate is

climbimg

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climbing

dramatically and there is no end to it.

Goverment

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Government

and some big

companies

need to take

lead

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and purpose some solutions for

unemployed

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. In the UK ,

for instance

, a big car company started

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for finding new employees but why it is

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plus for

this

soluitons

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because the company take employees from

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and who need

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help , not from any university or another

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efficient worker . As a

consuquence

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consequence

, workless

people

should see more and more offers like

this

from

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goverment

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government

and

companies

.

To sum up

, I once again restate my view that these problems

due to

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government

and some big

companies

.

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, If

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governments

government

and big

companies

take to lead for

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some

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solutions , unemployed and homeless

people

will have more life quality and

standarts

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standards

for

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of

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living .