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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Over the
last
 half
century
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 the pace of
change
 in the life of human beings has increased beyond our wildest expectations.
This
 has been driven by technological and scientific breakthroughs that are changing the whole way we view the world on an almost daily basis.
This
 means that
change
 is not always a personal option, but an inescapable fact of life, and we need to constantly adapt to keep pace with it. Those
people
 who believe they have achieved some security by doing the same,familiar things are living in denial, Even when
people
 believe they are resisting
change
 themselves, they cannot stop the world around them from changing.Sooner or later they will find that the familiar jobs no longer exist, or that the 'safe' patterns of behaviour are no longer appropriate.
However
,reaching the conclusion that
change
 is inevitable is not the same as assuming that
change
 is always for the
better'
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.Unfortunately, it is not always the case that new things are promoted because they have good impacts
for
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 the majority of
people
. A lot of innovations are made with the aim of making money for a few.
This
 is because it is the rich and powerful
people
 in our society who are able to impose changes (
such
 as in working conditions or property developments) that are in their own interests. In conclusion, I would say that
change
 can be stimulating and energising for individuals when they pursue it themselves, but that all
change
, including that which is imposed on
people
, does not necessarily have good outcomes.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial remuneration
  • exceptional
  • merit
  • talent
  • demand
  • entertainment value
  • career span
  • physical demands
  • justified
  • unfair
  • criticism
  • income inequality
  • societal priorities
  • sportsmanship
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