Public museums and art galleries are not needed because people can see historical objects and works on their computers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is certainly true that

computers

have become a vital tool for

people

to learn history and art.

However

,

while

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are extremely useful towards seeing historical and artistic

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, I do not agree with the idea that

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and

galleries

could be scrapped because of modern

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technology. There are several advantages to using

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in learning historical and artistic objects.

Firstly

,

computers

allow individuals to learn more knowledge regarding historical and artistic works easily and economically.

This

means that if

people

want to see mummification, they can have

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access to the internet rather than flying to Egypt.

Secondly

, some extremely valuable treasures may not be shown to

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for security reasons.

As a result

, tourists may be disappointed when they are not allowed to see their favourite

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and

computers

therefore

are the only way for

people

to know about historical items.

Finally

,

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and

galleries

could impose

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insecure feelings by using numerous

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security cameras

while

computers

do not.

However

, despite all the advantages that I said before,

computers

cannot replace

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and

galleries

and make them useless. It is believed that

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and

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collect a great deal of iconic treasures in many countries, and they are the best way to see historical and artistic works because of their reality and uniqueness. Touching

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do not provide

people

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authentic atmosphere as in real

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.

Apart from

this

,

computers

sometimes have fake information which may lead

people

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wrong concepts. In conclusion, it seems to me that

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and

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are useful and irreplaceable, though there are some benefits to using

computers

to see antique

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. It is much

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reasonable

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to use

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as a tool to support

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and

galleries

.