Public museums and art galleries are not needed because people can see historical objects and works on their computers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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have become a vital tool for

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to learn history and art.

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are extremely useful towards seeing historical and artistic

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, I do not agree with the idea that

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could be scrapped because of modern

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technology. There are several advantages to using

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in learning historical and artistic objects.

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,

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allow individuals to learn more knowledge regarding historical and artistic works easily and economically.

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means that if

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want to see mummification, they can have

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access to the internet rather than flying to Egypt.

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, some extremely valuable treasures may not be shown to

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for security reasons.

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, tourists may be disappointed when they are not allowed to see their favourite

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and

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therefore

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are the only way for

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to know about historical items.

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,

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could impose

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insecure feelings by using numerous

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do not.

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, despite all the advantages that I said before,

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cannot replace

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and

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and make them useless. It is believed that

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collect a great deal of iconic treasures in many countries, and they are the best way to see historical and artistic works because of their reality and uniqueness. Touching

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do not provide

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authentic atmosphere as in real

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sometimes have fake information which may lead

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wrong concepts. In conclusion, it seems to me that

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are useful and irreplaceable, though there are some benefits to using

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to see antique

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. It is much

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to use

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as a tool to support

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