now a days modern modes of transport are available still some people believe a bicycle is the best way to get from one place to another. do you agree or disagree?

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Advancements in technologies have paved the path to modernisation and transport is one of them, that's why, in the modern age, a plethora of modes of transportation can be seen.

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, a section of society, still asserts that nothing is best than

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to move from one location to another. I do believe that

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are

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good but only for smaller distances. A few arguments surround my opinion. The public which is in favour of

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gives their reasons as follows.

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convenient as compared to other transport vehicles. A lot of congestion does not let people pass and go fast at work or at any other place but with the help of

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people can cross through congested streets ,

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cars and buses cannot.

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, an exorbitant amount is needed to purchase any other mode like a car or a motorcycle, but it is easily affordable. What is more, it helps to keep fit and healthy and individuals do not need to do any extra effort to stay fit.

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, people join a gym and do cycling over there but if they will use it in their daily life as a mode of transit,

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they do not require any gym membership.

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, I believe that these

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eco-friendly,

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other motors or automobiles create emission gases which directly help to increase the pollution in

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already polluted world.

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, I

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opine that these

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good only for short distances because it takes time to reach places which

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far. To illustrate, a person, who does a job in another city which is 50 to 60 kilometres away, cannot use a cycle

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transportation.

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not suitable for all weather conditions as well.

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, myriad benefits

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available to the use of

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and these

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not only useful for the community but

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beneficial for the environment but

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some disadvantages, these

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not perfect for some circumstances.

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now a days modern modes of transport are available still some people believe a bicycle is the best way to get from one place to another. do you agree or disagree?

You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to yur neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neigbhour to come

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