A number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans are superior and entitled to employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including food and research. Discuss both these options and form your own opinion.

A number of humans feel that creatures should not be abused by
people
and that they must have the same rights as
people
, others consider that they should be used for human needs
such
as nutriment and investigation.
This
writing will discuss both views on why
animals
must be maintained and utilized. On one hand, a lot of
people
hunted
animals
to make bags, scarves and carpets from their skins. There are
also
those who use it for human food.
For example
, in Indonesia, they hunt rabbits and cook them into rabbit skewers.
Hence
, there are famous brands that use the leather of crocodiles to become bags and they sell them over price. Many rare
animals
died because of humans.
People
also
kill
animals
for
further
research or they think
this
animal
animals
are dangerous so they killed them.
On the other hand
, we should not hunt
animals
because destroy a number of valuable ecosystems and threatens the survival of the ecosystem.
For instance
, in Africa, many
animals
are allowed to live freely close to humans. On the internet, there are
people
who came to Africa and they sleep in villas, in the morning they can see
animals
such
as zebra and giraffes. If we exploited the ecosystem will destroy and in the future human will starve. In conclusion, I agree that we should not be exploited
animals
, we should save
animals
from animal hunters.
However
, there are many
people
who want to listen we should make posters to oppose.
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