The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market.
The first bar chart illustrates the number of
Japanese
tourists travelling in foreign countries from 1985 to 1995, in the span of ten years. Use synonyms
Also
, the second line graph gives information about Australia’s share of the Linking Words
Japanese
tourist market.
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Overall
, it can be clearly seen that sum of Linking Words
Japanese
tourists travelling around the world increased over the period, Use synonyms
as well as
, Australia’s share of Japan’s tourist trade.
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To begin
with, in the first graph, there was steady growth in the figure of tourists travelling abroad, followed by a slight decline until 1991. After that, the figure for Linking Words
Japanese
people travelling to other counties began to rise steadily from 1992 to 1995. And reached the highest sum of visitors (nearly 16 million) in 1995.
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According to
the second line graph, after increasing steadily, the percentage of travellers coming to Australia started to decline slightly until 1989. From that point, it started to climb considerably until 1994. Linking Words
Then
, there was a slight decline after 1994.Linking Words
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