Currently, there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicines. However, at best these medicines are ineffective and at worst they might be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
These days, substitute forms of medicines are being gained popularity and become widely used by many society members,
whereas
, others claim that these are inefficient and may affect negatively Linking Words
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a
human health. Remove the article
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the alternative treatment is cheaper and may seem Remove the comma
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an
effective, I believe strongly that it is risky and may have side effects in comparison with the advanced conventional way of treating.
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To begin
with, the first viewpoint which is new methods of healing cost less expensive and seem more effective. Linking Words
The alternative
approaches Correct article usage
Alternative
such
as a Hidjama and Linking Words
a
manual therapy are more affordable rather than taking pills and surgery. Remove the article
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For instance
, when specialists make the Hidjama, they take Linking Words
certain
amount of blood from Change the article
a certain
patient’s
vein in order to lower his blood pressure and normalize the heart rate. The patient may feel satisfied and the promised results seem to be reached just after the one session which costs around 10-15 dollars. Correct article usage
the patient’s
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according to
my perspective, Linking Words
this
has only a short-term effect, and after, may lead to infections or diseases like Linking Words
anemia
.
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anaemia
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beside
the risk of being infected, uncertified specialists who provide the procedure Replace the word
besides
makes
the new approach unreliable and doubtful. Correct subject-verb agreement
make
That is
why the typical approaches Linking Words
which
executed by Correct pronoun usage
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the
professional doctors and Correct article usage
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include
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including
use
of modern bу devices like ultrasound or X-ray Correct article usage
the use
scanner
are the best. Fix the agreement mistake
scanners
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, if a person has Linking Words
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diabetes, it may be detected by Change the article
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a special equipment
in a few minutes, Remove the article
special equipment
a piece of special equipment
further
, appropriately with Linking Words
level
of disease the pills will be determined, Add an article
the level
a level
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as
a result, the illness will be overcome efficiently.
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and as
To sum up
, Linking Words
this
essay argued why I firmly maintain that the trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine is dangerous and should be cut off. It is better to come up Linking Words
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health problems Change preposition
with
by
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the
advanced medicine.Correct article usage
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