Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is true that many
people
say that it is better to share
as much data as possible in scientific research, business, and academic area, meanwhile, some people
believe that some data is too essential and secret to be shared with the public. This
essay will examine both views.
To begin
with, many years ago, people
's knowledge about everything is restricted, but now, with the development of technology and globalization, they have plenty of information. Moreover
, with this
information, public knowledge is broadened. They can learn many things, such
as scientific research, business, and academics. This
development can help people
to learn something new and reach their goals. For example
, if some researchers want to make research about an old language, they can find some previous investigation to support their theories, and this
help make a new breakthrough in academic exploration and can help people
to know more about an ancient language. This
led to a great development of human life.
However
, some people
believe that what we know and find on the internet is just the tip of the iceberg and that there are many secrets behind it. They say many elites are hiding something from the public because the data is too secret and precious to share
. In addition
, the secret info is related to business, and companies do not want to share
what they find to keep more profit. For instance
, if a company is successful to find an ingredient to keep people
young, they do not want to share
this
with the community because they want to sell it and make some money. Another example, the government knows when is the end of planet Earth, and they keep it secret so nations do not panic. As a result
, the public does not know about this
and continues their normal lives.
To conclude
, I believe that not all the information we have to know because if we know everything, then
the world becomes a scary place to live. I believe the less we know less we worry.Submitted by ieltscuns2022 on
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