Your Local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council, In your letter - give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre - explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community - describe the possible side effects on local people if the centre closes

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to request you
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not
closing
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a sports and leisure
center
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in our
neighborhood
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so as to save money. These spots and leisure
centers
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are important and essential places for
our
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people who inhabit
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our
neighborhood
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. First of all, people in our community were attending those places to improve their health and
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relax when they are free from their job. Even though older
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and females were utilizing from there.
Secondly
, these places were constructed many years ago. All of the people in our
neighborhood
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tended to use them.
Lastly
, there are a few playgrounds for the children in our community.
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, they are beneficial
centers
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for all of us. Once again we will request you not
to
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allow to close the spots and leisure
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in order to be essential for our community. We look forward to hearing from you soon about these. Yours faithfully, Citizens of the Great House.
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