You have recently read a newspaper article about your school friend whom you did not hear about for a long time. Write a letter to the newspaper editor highlighting some article details. Ask for some information about your friend.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
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regards
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to an
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article
published about Jasjeet Singh's success in law school on 3rd June in Jag Bani newspaper. I am one of
the
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school friends
of
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Jasjeet Singh. As he was moved to London for higher studies
of
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law, I have not had any contact information
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him. After reading your article about his success in
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law career, I am eager to talk o him. The article has
beautifuly
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beautifully
presented his life history starting from his school in Barnala (India) to his post
gradualtion
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graduation
in London university.
Such
articles really
encourages
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the youth to work hard for their goals. As
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I have not seen him since 2019. It would be
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pleasure for me
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if you can provide any contact information
such
as phone number or email address. You can check with him for
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, I am pretty sure he will not deny. I will really appreciate your kind help and will look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours
faithfuly
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faithfully
, Jashanpreet Kaur
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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