You have recently read a newspaper article about your school friend whom you did not hear about for a long time. Write a letter to the newspaper editor highlighting some article details. Ask for some information about your friend.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
in regards
to an Fix the agreement mistake
regard
artice
published about Jasjeet Singh's success in law school on 3rd June in Jag Bani newspaper.
I am one of Correct your spelling
article
the
school friends Change the word
my
of
Jasjeet Singh. As he was moved to London for higher studies Change preposition
apply
of
law, I have not had any contact information Change preposition
in
of
him. After reading your article about his success in Change preposition
for
the
law career, I am eager to talk o him.
The article has Change the word
his
beautifuly
presented his life history starting from his school in Barnala (India) to his post Correct your spelling
beautifully
gradualtion
in London university. Correct your spelling
graduation
Such
articles really encourages
the youth to work hard for their goals.
AsChange the verb form
encourage
,
I have not seen him since 2019. It would be Remove the comma
apply
great
pleasure for me Add an article
a great
,
if you can provide any contact information Remove the comma
apply
such
as phone number or email address. You can check with him for this
, I am pretty sure he will not deny.
I will really appreciate your kind help and will look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfuly
,
Jashanpreet KaurCorrect your spelling
faithfully
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite