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Your local college is organizing an event on International Student’s Day. Write a letter to the organizer and say: •What topics would you like them to cover? •Why would it be interesting for students? •Ask questions about the arrangement

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to the
event
 that you are going to organise on international student's Day.
Firstly
, I want to appreciate you for arranging
this
event
,
moreover
, I have a recommendation for you about covering a new phenomenon called Chat GPT, which is the latest application in the form of artificial intelligence. Chat GPT is a wonderful application and
also
 would be very interesting for students because of its significant impact on modern research and its exceptional approaches. I believe almost all students tend to use it in their studies.
Finally
, I would like to ask you about the time of the
event
as well as
 the venue where you intended to perform it.
Also
, the capacity of the venue is very important to me,
therefore
, it is important that how many students could participate in the
event
. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Mohammadreza.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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