The maps illustrate an industrial area in Norbiton in the present day compared with plans for future development of the site.

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The maps below show a current

area

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and a planned, developed

area

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in the town of Norbiton. The current industrial

area

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of Norbiton hasn't been having any public space and services

such

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as a playground and school for the children, shops for entertainment and a medical centre,

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however

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these necessities will be developed in the future

area

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. The future plan included some changes about the number of housing and their placement, reducing the housing by merging them,

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making some of them closer to the town and adding new trajectories to the

crossroad

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in order to alter to have a sub

crossroad

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. Between the main

crossroad

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and the sub-one, there will be shops and a medical centre. In the farmland

area

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, there will be one big housing, which has a path that crossed the river to reach the other side of it. On the east side, most of the public service development will take wider space of the

area

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. On the west side, the shop centres will take placement which is near to the

crossroad

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and the housings too. These changes will make the town

area

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more efficient and convenient for people to live in.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, crossroad with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

195 words

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