The two pie charts below show changes in world population by region between 1900 and 2000. Summarize the information by choosing and reporting the key features and make any relevant comparisons.

The two pie charts below show changes in world population by region between 1900 and 2000. 

Summarize the information by choosing and reporting the key features and make any relevant comparisons.
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graphs indicate the variations in the percentage of
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of four different continents and other major regions of the world. The changes were studied for a century from the year 1900 to 2000. At first glance, the most striking feature noticed in both the graphs is the Asian community dominating more than half of the world population throughout the century and is followed by
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European citizens. In the year 1900, the mainlands of North America and Africa are seen to be covering the global
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by only 5% and 4.5% respectively.
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, it is evident that the numbers of Africa
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elevated in the year 2000 by 5%,
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the percentage of North America remains the same around the time period of 100 years. Looking at the charts it is noticeable that the region of Latin America has a slight increase in the digits in the
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2000 compared to that in 1900 and is chased by the area of
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East and North Africa. The
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of people in other regions
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stagnant
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over the period of 100 years.
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