The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The given table represents the trends of
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number
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a number
the number
people
who went Use synonyms
for
international Change preposition
on
travel
from 1990 to 2000. The destinations of Use synonyms
travel
include Africa, America, Asia and the Use synonyms
pacific
, Europe, and the Middle East.
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Pacific
According to
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total
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a total
the total
number
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people
who enjoyed international Use synonyms
travel
have increased from 1990 to 2000.
In 1990 a total of 448.9 Use synonyms
million
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people
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have
travelled abroad Unnecessary verb
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in
which a majority of 280.2 Change preposition
of
million
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people
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went
to Europe Wrong verb form
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whereas
, the least Linking Words
number
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people
which is 9.8 Use synonyms
million
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people
visited the Middle East. The numbers have increased to a total of 615.2 Use synonyms
million
who travelled internation by 1995 with Europe leading with 390.3 Use synonyms
million
and the Use synonyms
number
of Middle East travellers have increased by 1.5 Use synonyms
million
. By 2000, Use synonyms
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number
of Change the article
the number
people
who travelled to Asia and the Use synonyms
pacific
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Pacific
has
increased drastically by 37.1 Wrong verb form
had
million
from 80.3 Use synonyms
million
in 1995 to 117.4 Use synonyms
million
in 2000 compared to other destinations. In 2005 the total Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
people
who travelled Use synonyms
international
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internationally
have
increased Unnecessary verb
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upto
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up to
million
. Even though, Use synonyms
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number
of Change the article
the number
people
who went to America Use synonyms
have
decreased from 118.2 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
in 2000 to 113.2 Use synonyms
million
in 2005.
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Overall
, it can be said that Linking Words
number
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people
who enjoy international Use synonyms
travel
has increased over 15 years.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people, travel, million with synonyms.
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