The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The given table represents the trends of
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
people
who went for
international Change preposition
on
travel
from 1990 to 2000. The destinations of travel
include Africa, America, Asia and the pacific
, Europe, and the Middle East.
Correct your spelling
Pacific
According to
the table
Add a comma
,table
total
Change the article
a total
the total
number
of people
who enjoyed international travel
have increased from 1990 to 2000.
In 1990 a total of 448.9 million
people
have
travelled abroad Unnecessary verb
apply
in
which a majority of 280.2 Change preposition
of
million
people
went
to Europe Wrong verb form
going
whereas
, the least number
of people
which is 9.8 million
people
visited the Middle East. The numbers have increased to a total of 615.2 million
who travelled internation by 1995 with Europe leading with 390.3 million
and the number
of Middle East travellers have increased by 1.5 million
. By 2000, number
of Change the article
the number
people
who travelled to Asia and the pacific
Correct your spelling
Pacific
has
increased drastically by 37.1 Wrong verb form
had
million
from 80.3 million
in 1995 to 117.4 million
in 2000 compared to other destinations. In 2005 the total number
of people
who travelled international
Change the adjective
internationally
have
increased Unnecessary verb
apply
upto
693.7 Correct your spelling
up to
million
. Even though, number
of Change the article
the number
people
who went to America have
decreased from 118.2 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
in 2000 to 113.2 million
in 2005.
Overall
, it can be said that number
of people
who enjoy international travel
has increased over 15 years.Submitted by sandaminiv99 on
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people, travel, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 8 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 6 times.
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