The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The given table represents the trends of
number
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a number
the number
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of
people
who went
for
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on
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international
travel
from 1990 to 2000. The destinations of
travel
include Africa, America, Asia and the
pacific
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Pacific
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, Europe, and the Middle East.
According to
the
table
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total
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a total
the total
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number
of
people
who enjoyed international
travel
have increased from 1990 to 2000. In 1990 a total of 448.9
million
people
have
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apply
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travelled abroad
in
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of
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which a majority of 280.2
million
people
went
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going
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to Europe
whereas
, the least
number
of
people
which is 9.8
million
people
visited the Middle East. The numbers have increased to a total of 615.2
million
who travelled internation by 1995 with Europe leading with 390.3
million
and the
number
of Middle East travellers have increased by 1.5
million
. By 2000,
number
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the number
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of
people
who travelled to Asia and the
pacific
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Pacific
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has
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had
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increased drastically by 37.1
million
from 80.3
million
in 1995 to 117.4
million
in 2000 compared to other destinations. In 2005 the total
number
of
people
who travelled
international
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internationally
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have
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apply
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increased
upto
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up to
693.7
million
. Even though,
number
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the number
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of
people
who went to America
have
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decreased from 118.2
million
in 2000 to 113.2
million
in 2005.
Overall
, it can be said that
number
of
people
who enjoy international
travel
has increased over 15 years.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people, travel, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 8 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 6 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • International travel
  • Million
  • Trend
  • Gradual rise
  • Significant jump
  • Technological advancements
  • Increased affluence
  • Globalization
  • Rate of increase
  • Low-cost airlines
  • Ease of travel
  • Tourism promotion
  • Regional differences
  • Cultural exchange
  • Economic impact
  • Environmental concerns
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