New editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print on newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news, and would it be better if more good news was reported?
New
editors
decide what to broadcast on television and what to print on
newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad Change preposition
in
news
, and would it be better if more good news
was reported?
It is true that editors
have to make difficult decisions about their work like which news
stories they publish or broadcast, and also
their choices are no
suspect to Correct your spelling
not
influenced
by different Add a missing verb
be influenced
kind
of factors. I firmly believe that I would prefer good Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
news
than exposed to too much bad news
.
In the first place, editors
face a range of facts and ideas when deciding what news print
in newspapers and broadcast on TV. They focus on solely these things Correct your spelling
newsprint
while
they are deciding. Firstly
, they have their own responsibilities based on their work, such
as inform
the public about significant events and different Wrong verb form
informing
kind
of issues. Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
Secondly
, they also
consider whether readers and viewers
interested in watching TV channels and reading stories. So, they must focus on and prioritize these. Add a verb
areviewers
wereviewers
Finally
, we know that editors
are likely under the
pressure Correct article usage
apply
by
their owners who employ them. Change preposition
from
For instance
, owners might have particular workers that they can promote them.
On the other hand
, some people become accustomed to bad news
. Furthermore
, we are watching variety
of events, Add an article
a variety
the variety
such
as about
crime, war, tragic or natural disasters on TV. Some people become cynical and sceptical Change preposition
apply
by
these reports. So I would prefer to see more positive Change preposition
of
news
like kindness
of volunteers who help in their communities and others.
Add an article
the kindness
To sum up
, it must be extremely important for editors
to choose which news
they have to offer, but I would welcome a greater emphasis on good news
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