New editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print on newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news, and would it be better if more good news was reported?

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New
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decide what to broadcast on television and what to print
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newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad
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, and would it be better if more good
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was reported? It is true that
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have to make difficult decisions about their work like which
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stories they publish or broadcast, and
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their choices are
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of factors. I firmly believe that I would prefer good
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than exposed to too much bad
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. In the first place,
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face a range of facts and ideas when deciding what
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news print
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in newspapers and broadcast on TV. They focus on solely these things
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they are deciding.
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, they have their own responsibilities based on their work,
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the public about significant events and different
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of issues.
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, they
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consider whether readers and
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interested in watching TV channels and reading stories. So, they must focus on and prioritize these.
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, we know that
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are likely under
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pressure
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their owners who employ them.
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, owners might have particular workers that they can promote them.
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, some people become accustomed to bad
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, we are watching
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of events,
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as
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crime, war, tragic or natural disasters on TV. Some people become cynical and sceptical
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these reports. So I would prefer to see more positive
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like
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of volunteers who help in their communities and others.
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, it must be extremely important for
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to choose which
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they have to offer, but I would welcome a greater emphasis on good
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