Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development ?

In today's world, the rate of mortality caused by home-made treatments and medicines has risen substantially which is the result of neglecting doctor's visits.

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may have some unchangeable effects on patients. I am of the opinion that

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is a detrimental development, and in

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essay, I will discuss some of the reasons. The first point is that these self-treated methods may have side effects on all parts of the body of which a person is unaware. What I mean is, patients do not have adequate and accurate knowledge about the functions of the organs.

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, taking substitute medicines without any prescriptions might have deleterious

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not merely on the damaged section, but on the other sane cells. What is more, the damages would not confine to just these consequences.

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are thousands of people who may develop

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a mysterious disease which might not be curable in the future. The other main reason is that physicians are specialists in curing

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body, and they possess the remedy in their hands.

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, if societies' trust and faith in doctors subside, social media and new ways of fraud will take control of medical communities. Drinking camel's urine is a good illustration of

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which was prevalent in

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pandemic and led to a plethora of poisonings and in the most severe case, the death of patients.

To sum up

, people should always remember that uncontrolled consumption of made-up drugs or unknown cures can result in a myriad of unforgettable and inevitable impacts on people's lives.