The bar chart shows the number of male and female people arrested by type of offence

The bar chart shows the number of male and female people arrested by type of offence
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people based on their gender in eight groups of offence crimes in September 2008.
Overall
, it is evident from the graph that
males
were dominant in five types of offence violations.
To begin
with, the most common
crime
both
males
and
females
due to
violence against the person were 31% and 34%, respectively.
In addition
, in the type of theft and handling of stolen goods,
females
were higher than
males
roughly below 35%,
whereas
the
males
were slightly above 20%. In other offences of
crime
, the proportion of
males
who were arrested was 15%, which is more 2 % above than the number of
females
itself. In a
crime
of robbery, both
males
and
females
were below 5%, which means similar to the percentage of people arrested because of fraud and forgery at 2% and 4%, respectively.
Subsequently
, in the
crime
of criminal damage and drug offences, the number of
males
was more than the
females
which had 2% differences.
Moreover
, the percentage of
males
who were arrested because of burglary doubled that of
females
at 8%.
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