Technology that will allow cars to function automatically, without a human driver is currently being developed. When the technology for self-driving has been perfected, these vehicles will replace cars operated by humans. Is this positive or negative development?

In recent days, there has been a car automation development, and it will be the mainstream of vehicles in the future

instead

of cars that people have to drive by themselves. In my opinion,

this

progress would have a positive impact on safety on the roads and people’s lives.

Firstly

,

this

advancement would diminish the number of car accidents on the pathways and victims.

This

is because most vehicle troubles stem from human error

such

as watching phones or feeling sleepy

while

they drive.

According to

research done in 2019, 70% of incidents on the highways occurred

due to

the lack of

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attention and precaution.

Hence

, if the technological system takes the place of humans and steers completely, it can produce a beneficial effect on citizens or society. Another key point that I would like to emphasize is the fact that it would improve and upgrade older and disabled individuals’ lives. It means that they are not able to utilize vehicles for livelihood

such

as going shopping or commuting nowadays,

thus

if they harness

this

progress, they can go wherever they want to.

For instance

, in

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many aged individuals who live in rural areas feel bothersome since they have to drive cars

although

they do not have enough physical ability to steer a vehicle.

Thus

,

this

development can solve the issue that disabled or elderly people have, and be beneficial for them. In conclusion, though there are some disadvantages of car automation, it would have more advantages than adverse influences.

Therefore

, I consider that it would create beneficial results

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the public and residents,

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it would provide

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convenient life for handicapped and retired individuals.