The diagram and chart beneath give data about deals and offer costs for Coca Cola.

The diagram and chart beneath give data about deals and offer costs for Coca Cola.
The pie chart below illustrates the percentage of coca cola's volume being consumed in 5 different regions,
while
the line graph gives information about the share price of that drink between 1996 and 2001.
Overall
, as we can see, North America had the largest proportion, and the highest cost of fizzling was in 1998. Looking at the line graph, it is easily apparent that there was a steady growth of 40 dollars from 96-97,
then
a sharp decline took place in the middle of the year 1997.
However
, the share price increased steeply which reached a peak of 80 dollars in 1998. From 1998-2000, the expenditure of fizzling fell to a low close to 48 dollars . North America and Latin America, in sequence, had the greatest portion which was about 30% and 26%.
Moreover
, the Europeans
in
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the third rank in consuming coca cola with approximately one-fifth of the total which was around 17 billion bottles.
Finally
, the smallest proportion belonged to African and Middle
east
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people who merely made up 7% of the total.
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