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The number of people working from home has grown in some countries. What advantages and disadvantages can come to this trend?

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With the aggressive growth of technology, working from home become feasible. Many people think remote working can remarkably
saving
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the
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commute
time
 and achieve work-life balance.
However
, some believe it might
conducive
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to employee’s
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employee’s
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 productivity. I think the merits surpass the demerits. Admittedly, telecommuting
generate
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beneficial
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on
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for
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 both employers and employees. From
staff’s
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the staff’s
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 perspective, they thrift the daily commuting
time
.
Instead
 of spending
time
 in heavy traffic during
the
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apply
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rush hour, employees can sleep
adequate
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 and ultimate their energy
on
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at
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 work. At the same
time
, they have
save
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 the cost of driving or taking public transportation. From
owner’s
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the owner’s
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 aspect, they free up office space renting
fee
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, miscellaneous
fee
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, and maintenance
fee
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,
turn
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 to invest
company’s
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the company’s
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 projects or products.
Furthermore
, everyone
control
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controls
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 and distribute their responsibility between family and work,
achieve
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achieving
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work-life
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a work-life
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 balance.
Nevertheless
, remote working may lead to negative impacts.
Firstly
, the communication between colleagues lack
of
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apply
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face-to-face interaction but only go through online software,
will
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 lead to plenty
challenging
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of challenging
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 repercussion.
For example
, when
problem
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occur
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, coworkers can hardly exchange information and address the issue immediately.
Secondly
, when in
office
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the office
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, managers can easily track the progress.
However
, working remotely exaggerate the difficulty of
evaluate
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evaluating
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 every staff’s performance and
risk
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the risk
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 reach the company’s target revenue. In conclusion, working from home is both a boon and a bane. The determent is whether staff can manage themselves efficiently and
aware
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be aware
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 of the shortcoming accompany by remote working.
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