The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps depict the approaching roads to a
city
hospital in 2007 and 2010.Overall
, the facilities have not changed much. The variation includes a bus
station, roundabout, and separate staff and public parking.
In the south of the city
hospital in 2007, City
Road
reached the hospital avenue. Therefore
ended on the ring road
. Furthermore
, on both sides of the hospital highway, there were six bus
stops. Additionally
, the car park was located on the east of the hospital road
and was usable for both staff and the public.
In 2010, the hospital road
ended at the hospital from above and City
Road
from below by roundabouts. On the right side of hospital
,Add an article
the hospital
road
the 3 bus
stops have been demolished and new bus
stations were located on the west of the hospital road
. It leads to both roundabouts ,Moreover
a staff car park has been located on the east of the hospital Add a comma
,Moreover
road
and a public car park has been transferred to the right-hand side of the hospital.Submitted by shokri.hananeh on
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