In some countries celebrities complain about the way media publicize their private lives. Some people say that they should accept it as part of their fame. Do you agree or disagree ?

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is playing an important role in our
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by publishing news through e-
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or printed ones. Especially, when the
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gives exaggerated focus on the personal
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of famous
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, sometimes it's a curse for them.
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, a few
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believe that every celeb should bear with it as it's a
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of their
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. I personally disagree with
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statement. My inclination shall be explained in upcoming paragraphs. There are many factors why publishing too much news about celebs' personal
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should not be
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of their
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. The primary one is it is harmful to
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as well as
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those famous
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. By that I mean, it diverts
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’s attention away from important topics
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as politics, business or the environment.
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, the public knows more about Salman Khan and his broken relationship than the political issues. Apart from that, celebrities' bad actions or habits sometimes become negative inspirations for the public.
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, If some celebs drinks and smokes, it is copied by many youngsters as they think it's glamorous to do so.
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, sometimes
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also
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creates a detrimental effect on stars.
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, when paparazzi follow them everywhere, it breaks down their peace of mind. They can not enjoy themselves like the common man, at one ,point it will be stressful for them and their career
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suffers.
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, a famous actor Sushant Shigh died because followed by the paparazzi.
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, the counterpart argues that it is
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of their status. Mainly, famous person followed by many
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as role models and want to be like them,
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why they want to know each and every detail about their personal
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.
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, Sometimes celebs themself want to be covered by the
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all the time in order to survive in the cut-throat competition of
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entertainment world. In
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way, they can build their
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and gradually
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becomes
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of their life. But,
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does not mean the
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has all the right to publish anything about them, especially about their relationship or private movement of life, just to grab more public attention and increase their customers.
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,
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, stars are idols of many
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and
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should be maintained by the
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to survive in their careers, I believe, publicizing their personal
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is stressful, distracts
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and gives some bad habits to youngsters.
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, as human rights they can keep the privacy of their life and need not share all the stuff,
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should
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know where to draw the line.
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