The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart depicts the number of visitors visiting a unique Caribbean
island
from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, it can be obviously seen that the amount
of tourists experienced a significant rise,Change the quantifier
number
while
all of the three figures increased over the period. In addition
, the figure for visitors who prefer to stay on cruise ships increased sharply.
Looking first at the visitors staying on cruise ships, it was the least popular item at the beginning. However
, the number of people
increased double from 0.3 in 2010 to 2 in 2017. The figure for people
who were willing to stay on the island
witnessed a rise from 0.6 in 2010 to 1.5 in 2013, while
this
remained stable until 2015. Then
the figure for people
who are willing to stay on the island
decreased slightly to 1.3 in 2016 and rose to 1.5 in the end.
Turning to the remaining item, the total number of people
who visit a Caribbean island
rises substantially from 1 in the beginning to 3.5 in the end.Submitted by vivi191917 on
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 3 times.
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