Some expert believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages ?
Nowadays learning a some scientists think that in
language
is a very controversial topic. People
are looking for the best way to learn English.Some people
think that it is better for young people
to begin
learning a different accent at first
academy rather than the second one Correct article usage
the first
however
other people
think that learning language
in a second Add an article
a language
the language
school
is much better. This
essay will examine views and opinion will be given.
Firstly
if children start an
early age they can learn faster because their learning capabilities are much more strong. In the earlier ,year children are more likely to learn new things. Their Change preposition
at an
brain
strong and fresh. İf they start early they can recognize earlier importance of learning a new Add a verb
isbrain
wasbrain
language
.
In first
school
they have a lot of free time, in this
free ,time they can learn faster.
,Secondly
younger Add a comma
,Secondly
people
are easy to control and manipulate some experts say that the best age to learning
a new Wrong verb form
learn
language
is 7 to 12 ages. İf they develop a learning language
they can learn more than one different language
.
On the other hand
learning language
early can have some disadvantages. Earlier people
are learning their mother language
just new. Even if they don't learn their mom
accent very well, if they start to learn a new accent they might forget their mother Change noun form
mom's
language
. Every citizen must learn their mother language
very well firstly
later than they can be bilingual or multilingual.
In early ,ages peoples are not enough mature to recognize why they learn or what they learn something. As the age increases awareness of people
also
increases. For ,example in first
,school
I didn't know what Add an article
the school
a school
i
am studying or why Change the capitalization
I
i
am studying some subject. As I grow I started to recognize something. Change the capitalization
I
Further
Add a comma
,
the
secondary Correct article usage
apply
school
learning capabilities can be increased because of the development of the brain. In first
school
they have been learning something for a Add a comma
,school
while
, and they recognize how to learn something so it can be better to learn in secondary school
.
In conclusion
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,conclusion
i
strongly believe that learning Change the capitalization
I
language
earlier Correct article usage
a language
better
because of the mention Add a missing verb
is better
that
above. So advantages of learning in primary Correct word choice
apply
school
advantages outweight
the disadvantages of learning in a secondary Correct your spelling
outweigh
school
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