The diagram below shows process for recycling platic bottles

The diagram below shows process for recycling platic bottles
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The provided graph illustrates the recycling of
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bottles
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.
Overall
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, the process consists of 9 steps. Which starts from the collection of
plastic
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bottles
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from trash bins to the production of useful products from recycled
plastic
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waste
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.
The first step is
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collecting
plastic
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bottles
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from trash bins by human labour and transporting the collected
waste
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material to the factory in huge
waste
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collection trucks. Later these collected
bottles
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are sorted by workers and passed through machines to compress into blocks. Following, these blocks are passed through crushers and crushed into pieces which directly fall into washing tanks. 
Subsequently
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, the washed items are later passed through machines which process the products into
plastic
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pallets, which are
then
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heated to form raw material.
Following
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this
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raw materials are used in the production of multiple goods like cloths, pencils,
plastic
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containers,
bottles
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and so on.
This
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process continues, the materials produced are later thrown into
waste
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bins and collected later for recycling.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles, waste with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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