the graph below shows the number off shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The line chart comprehensively illustrates the
figure
of
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for
store
discontinuations and emerges in seven years from 2011 to 2018.
It is evident from the graph that the figure
of
closures and openings of Change preposition
for
store
exhibited a decreasing pattern over the period shown. Fix the agreement mistake
stores
Overall
, store
discontinuations had the lowest figure
while
openings of store
experienced the greatest figure
.
Around 6500 store
were out of business at the beginning of the period. In 2012, the Fix the agreement mistake
stores
figure
of
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for
store
closures was recorded at 6000. The quantity increased significantly to 7000 in 2013. Then
, the figure
dropped dramatically to around 6300 and approximately 500 in 2014 and 2015, respectively. The following year, the store
discontinuations significantly soared to just above 5000. The figure
of
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store
closures dropped slightly to 5000 in 2017 and surpassed just above 5000 at the end
of the duration.
Around 8500 store
emerged in 2011. Change to a plural noun
stores
Then
, the figure
had a significant decrease in 2012 to 4000. After that, the figure
inclined significantly to 5000 and 6000 in 2013 and 2014, respectively. The quantity of store
openings decreased to 4000 and then
levelled off in 2017. At the end
of the period, the figure
of
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for
emerging
Correct article usage
the emerging
store
declined to 3000.Fix the agreement mistake
stores
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Vocabulary: Replace the words figure, store with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 4 times.
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