A friend has offered you some work in his company. You are currently employed and not able to start for three months. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter

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Dear Joe, Hope everything is good at your end. I am

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good here. I just got your letter; I am so excited to receive it. From ,the letter I came to know about the job offer from your firm. You know what

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offer means to me. Your organisation is one of the top-ranked companies in the industry. With your hard work you have achieved that position, and I really want to work with you. I really consider myself as lucky on receiving

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offer. But before two weeks I started working for a new company as a Project Manager. There are five people working under me. At

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,stage if I quit

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job it will

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affect their career and future. In

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situation quitting the job is not right. After completing the project I can join your group, which will take approximately three months of time. So, for now, I request you to hire a suitable candidate

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of me. After three months I will join you if there will be still a vacancy for me. Hope you understand my position. Yours Loving Friend, Jen

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

189 words

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