The chart below shows the persentage of male and female teachers and six different types

The chart below shows the persentage of male and female teachers and six different types
The bar chart compares the proportion of
teachers
in terms of their gender in six different types of educational
institution
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institutions
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(namely, nursery/pre-
school
, primary
school
, secondary
school
, college, private training institute and university) in the United Kingdom in 2010.
Overall
, females were far more active in educating young children compared to male
teachers
, but there were more of the latter in higher levels of educational settings. As for middle schooling,
however
, the number of
teachers
from both genders hardly differed. The participation of female
teachers
in nursery/
pre-
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school
and primary
school
was by far the highest at almost 90% and 85% respectively, which means that the percentage of male tutors was nowhere as close.
Likewise
, there were more female educators in secondary
school
at about 55%,
while
male ones accounted for just 45%.
On the other hand
, it was college only where the same proportion of female and male
teachers
worked (50%).
Lastly
, in the
last
two academic affairs given, private training
institute
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institutes
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and
university
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, men`s figures took the lead, making up
for
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55% and 75% of the total number of
teachers
accordingly
.
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