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Many people choose to learn many foreign languges. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this.

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1) It is true that learning
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 are preferable for many individuals. In
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 of foreign
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 and explain why I feel it has far more significant advantages. It should be acknowledged that learning many foreign
languages
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 can offer a number of certain
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 to
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 one of which is to learn more.
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 is because it is worldview is improving for life and
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 want to do more and more to live in a better condition.
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 can lead to a person will having more opportunities and desire to learn more about other countries and learn more in life. Another advantage of
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 trend is connected easily to finding a job. The reason is that will be more likely to earn more money because learning many
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 helps
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 both work and earn.
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, translators always have a job and they earn easily and much more than other workers. There are
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 other
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 learn other
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 that are worth mentioning and
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 is speech becomes fluent because the more a language is learned, the more beautiful speech becomes. It can
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 lead to changing dreams for the future and not wasting time on empty. Another benefit is combining
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. Sees the lives of
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 from other countries and compares them with his own.
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 need to be useful to others In conclusion, it has some
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 as much to learn and more job options, fluency of pronunciation and a gathering of
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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