The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table and the pie chart depict information about the number of people who visited the Ashdown Museum and the amount of their satisfaction before and after reconstruction.
Overall
, the number of Ashdown Museum’s visitors
has increased after refurbishment as well as
their satisfaction has climbed significantly. Also
, the percentage of people who did not answer the survey remained the same before and after the repairing
process.
Before the refurbishment, 74,000 individuals had visited Replace the word
repair
this
museum which
only 15% and 30% of them were very satisfied and just satisfied respectively by visiting that place. The majority of tourists about 40% were dissatisfied and 10 per cent of them were very dissatisfied Correct word choice
and
by
visiting Ashdown Museum. 5% of Change preposition
with
travelers
did not answer the survey to inform questioners about their opinion and Change the spelling
travellers
this
proportion remain
steady even after the reconstruction.
After the refurbishment, Wrong verb form
remained
while
the number of visitors
has increased, they have become more delighted by the changes. As we can see, the percentage of very satisfied and just satisfied visitors
have increased to 35 and 40 respectively. On the other hand
, the proportion of dissatisfied and very dissatisfied visitors
have
declined to 15 and 5 per cent respectively.Correct subject-verb agreement
has
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