The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia.

The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia.
The two pie chart compares five categories of Canadian and Australian retails (TV, Radio, Print, Online and Not Specified) from 2010 to 2015. Units are measured in percentage. It is noticeable that the proportions of selling Radio and Not Specified experienced a significant fall over the five-year period
while
this
figure for TV and Online saw a huge rise. In 2010, 40% of the average Canadian and Australian sales rate went on TV which was the largest pie chart,
however
, by 2015 the figure for
this
category had fallen by 37% . During a decade, the demand Online from Canadian and Australian consumers experienced a considerable rose from 36% to 52% .
By contrast
in terms of largest retails belonged to those not specified in the first year,
however
, next year period there was 1 present rise in
this
rate.
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