Many newspapers and magazines feature stories about the private lives of famous people. We know what they eat, where they buy their clothes and who they love. We also often see pictures of them in private situations. Is it appropriate for a magazine or newspaper to give this kind of private information about people?

At present,
newspapers
and magazines getting wider popularity by featuring
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lives
of
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.
they
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are presenting
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part of their
lives
to
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personal aspects which is
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distrubing
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personally believe that it is not noble to expose someone's personal life in
newspapers
.
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Apparently
,there are several reasons why
people
's personal
lives
should not be in the
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newspaper
.
to begin
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for example
,the fact that princess diana is going out with a sportsman is not important
news
.
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if
newspapers
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to publish articles about famous
people
they should focus on their public events and achievements.
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otherwords
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it would be
more wise
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if there is an article about princess diana about her works of charity.which will increase public
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awareness
of
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important
problems.
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jouranlist
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journalist
journalists
should make sure that they write about the facts only not
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should be able to rely on
newspapers
for the actual truth. Magazines
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the other hand,focus on social
news
,but
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feel it is more acceptable for them to contain some features about famous personalities.
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often observed that these stories often benefit the stars by giving free publicity
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them.
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also
believe that magazine stories should not mention things that are too embarrassing or untrue just to attract
people
to buy the magazine.sensational stories
such
as these cause great unhappiness for the
people
concerned. In
conclusion
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think
news papers
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should concentrate on real
news
,but magazines can
features
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some articles
of
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people
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person
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private
lives
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