In the future all cars, buses,trucks, will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be the passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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Self-drive vehicles will be the new norm in the future.

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driver

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in the

cars

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,buses or even trucks only the passengers. In my opinion, the disadvantages of driverless

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outweigh the advantages. Nowadays, we can find a self-drive

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in some

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new generation

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. Some people believe that driverless

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are the solution

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road accidents.

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accidents happen

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mistake

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. And many situations need

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decision

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to weigh the situation and take serious actions according.

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machines take decisions

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limited information mostly inputted by

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job is an important job for

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number of people. Imagine! All the car

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, taxi

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buses

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drivers

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, and truck

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are jobless.It would be

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an economic crisis.

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,the presence of a

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in the car is so important.

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, most of the planes have auto-pilot

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option

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cabin should be empty, but there is a pilot and a co-pilot, who make sure that the auto-pilot

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is working well,

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interfere in some situations that need the human decision.

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are revolutionary

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, it couldn’t deny the importance of

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existence even to supervise only and take the right decisions when needed. I believe that the self-drive

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will be added to the new means of transportation in the future to help the

driver

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not to nominate him.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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driverless vehicles
advantages
disadvantages
increased safety
reduced traffic congestion
improved efficiency
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