In many countries today, women have full-time jobs. Therefore, it is reasonable to share housework equally between men and women. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Recently, more and more

female

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females

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are entering the workforce and working full time. With

this

trend, the idea that equal sharing of

household

chores at home is reasonable is spreading. I completely

agree

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this

idea.

Firstly

,

women

earn enough money to cover their living expenses, which means they play an important role in supporting the

household

. If females share much payment to support home with men, housework

also

should be shared between them equally.

For instance

, data shows that the average income for men in each year decreased by 2,000,000 yen, compared to 1980.

This

leads to the result of research about the degree of

women

’s salary contribution. 90% of men answered that it is incredibly helpful to sustain a

household

when females work and earn money a lot.

Therefore

, sharing housework should be equal because

women

earn sufficient money to cover their living costs.

Secondly

, nowadays, many countries encourage to be active

to hire

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smart

people

regardless of their gender. It is required for

women

to participate in companies or societies and they have

chance

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to work than before.

For instance

, my company sets a goal to hire more

women

for engineering staff and managerial staff. The human resource tried to hire talented employees and

people

regardless of sex to keep a precious asset and to grow the company.

Thus

, doing housekeeping in

corporation

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together is needed for

women

and society, which would lead skilled

people

to be active in societies and companies. In conclusion, housework should be borne equally in dual-earner couples.

This

is because of equality of supporting housekeeping and

household

, and because many countries encourage accomplished

people

to be active in societies and companies.