In many countries today, women have full-time jobs. Therefore, it is reasonable to share housework equally between men and women. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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are entering the workforce and working full time. With
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trend, the idea that equal sharing of
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chores at home is reasonable is spreading. I completely
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idea.
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,
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earn enough money to cover their living expenses, which means they play an important role in supporting the
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. If females share much payment to support home with men, housework
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should be shared between them equally.
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, data shows that the average income for men in each year decreased by 2,000,000 yen, compared to 1980.
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leads to the result of research about the degree of
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’s salary contribution. 90% of men answered that it is incredibly helpful to sustain a
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when females work and earn money a lot.
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, sharing housework should be equal because
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earn sufficient money to cover their living costs.
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, nowadays, many countries encourage to be active
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smart
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regardless of their gender. It is required for
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to participate in companies or societies and they have
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to work than before.
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, my company sets a goal to hire more
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for engineering staff and managerial staff. The human resource tried to hire talented employees and
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regardless of sex to keep a precious asset and to grow the company.
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, doing housekeeping in
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together is needed for
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and society, which would lead skilled
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to be active in societies and companies. In conclusion, housework should be borne equally in dual-earner couples.
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is because of equality of supporting housekeeping and
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, and because many countries encourage accomplished
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to be active in societies and companies.

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