The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
The diagram depicts a way through which
plastic
bottles
are recycled.
Overall
, the whole process consists of nine steps , which start with recycling the bottles
in a dustbin and end with producing the products from raw materials.
As can be seen from this
figure, the cycle commences with the disposal
of the glass in a dustbin by the consumer. After that,it is picked up by a garbage truck and carried out to the recycling centre for sorting. Then
, in the recycling centre sort out the bottles
and the worker separates the recyclable and non-recyclable bottles
. After that, recyclable bottles
are transferred into blocks for compressing . Following that, the compressed bottles
are delivered to the Crushing machine which is washed with extra materials.
In step 6, the washed material is placed into a machine that produces plastic
plates.
Next,
the plastic
bottles
are heated up to get the raw material . In step 8, raw material is converted into the desired forms like bottles
and plastic
boxes.Finally
, the raw material is used to produce different products such
as t-shirts, pencils, plastic
boxes and bottles
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