The pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000
The given table displays the accumulation cost of
fish
trading and the pie chart depicts the proportion of fish
obtained from three different countries namely China, Canada, and others
in the United States of America in a certain period of time (1988 and 2000).
In general, in the year 2000, the total rate of fish
trading get highest compared to the value in 1992 and 1988. In addition
, Canada and others
are the two countries which donate more fish
to the USA, while
China was contribute the least.
Looking into detail, it is evident that in 2000, there was a huge total profit of
Change preposition
from
fishing
trade, accounting for 10.72, followed by the years 1992 and 19988 only contributing 8.52 and 6.57 respectively.
Correct article usage
the fishing
Furthermore
, the rate of fish
imported from Canada contributed 60 % in 1988, whereas
in 2000 only 28 % which is the least interest among the three countries. Moreover
, in 1992 and 2000 the proportion of others
donating fish
to America was the biggest, stated at 46 % and 42 % correspondingly, meanwhile the least percentage was China only giving 20 % and 30 % respectively. However
, in 1988 the ratio of fish
imported from others
only donate 27 % of the total.Submitted by ieltscuns2022 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, others with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
▼