The pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000

The pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000
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The given table displays the accumulation cost of
fish
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trading and the pie chart depicts the proportion of
fish
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obtained from three different countries namely China, Canada, and
others
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in the United States of America in a certain period of time (1988 and 2000). In general, in the year 2000, the total rate of
fish
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trading get highest compared to the value in 1992 and 1988.
In addition
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, Canada and
others
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are the two countries which donate more
fish
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to the USA,
while
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China was contribute the least. Looking into detail, it is evident that in 2000, there was a huge total profit
of
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fishing
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the fishing
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trade, accounting for 10.72, followed by the years 1992 and 19988 only contributing 8.52 and 6.57 respectively.
Furthermore
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, the rate of
fish
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imported from Canada contributed 60 % in 1988,
whereas
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in 2000 only 28 % which is the least interest among the three countries.
Moreover
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, in 1992 and 2000 the proportion of
others
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donating
fish
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to America was the biggest, stated at 46 % and 42 % correspondingly, meanwhile the least percentage was China only giving 20 % and 30 % respectively.
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, in 1988 the ratio of
fish
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imported from
others
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only donate 27 % of the total.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, others with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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