the pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the us between 1988 and 2000

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The given table and pie charts serve data about the value of importing a particular seafood to the US and where it comes from, the numbers are taken from 1988 and 2000.

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the data,

It is clear that

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there was an Increasing in the total price of Dollars, and it reached the highest number in 2000.

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, in terms of source, there was a decrease in the amount of exported fish from one of the suppliers. Looking into detail, in 1988, the table shows that it had the lowest total value (6.57).

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, in the following five years, it rose around 30% to 8.52.

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, the positive trend occurred until 2000, which became the peak of the total value at 10.57.

On the other hand

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, the pie charts show a significant decrease in fish imported to the US by Canada, even though there is no information about the reason.

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, the amount dropped from 60% in 1988 to 28% in 2000. Meanwhile, China, slowly up from 13% to 20%, and end up at 30% in the

last

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year.

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the pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the us between 1988 and 2000

In the modern era, governments have been significantly investing vast sums in artworks. Some proponents argue that this substantial artistic investment could be more judiciously directed towards other essential sectors.

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discubss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Many parents complain that computer games have no value to their chuldren’s Study. On the contrary , those online games have produced a lot of negative effect on their mental and physical development. What is your opinion

Many governments have laws that ban the sale and use of hard drugs such as heroin and cocaine, yet they allow people to buy drugs such as tobacco and alcohol. Laws that prohibit the sale and use of hard drugs should be applied to all drugs, including tobacco and alcohol. What is your opinion?